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|Choices by Lindelea||4 Review(s)|
|Grey Wonderer||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/16/2003|
|This is a very moving story. These are two of my favorite characters and I love what you are doing with this. I have read other stories about the aftermath of the battle, but the relationships in yours ring very true. I am looking forward to the next chapter so I will read on.|
|Tim the Enchanter||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2003|
|A wonderful introduction! I look forward to future chapters. |
Author Reply: Well thank you, Tim! Have posted a new chapter just this morning as a matter of fact.
|Mysterious Jedi||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2003|
|Good, please keep going.|
Author Reply: Thanks for the encouragement. Will keep going all the way to chapter 6 (the end). At least this story is finished and beta-read, already. That's a help. All I have to do is incorporate the beta changes, chapter-by-chapter.
|shirebound||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2003|
|Oh, this is wonderful!|
"Then his questing fingers found fabric, a sleeve; he reached further and discovered a small hand. Taking it in his own, he felt the small fingers twitch as he closed his hand around them."
What an amazingly detailed perspective to be taking on this oh-too-brief part of the book.
Author Reply: My, high praise coming from one of my favourite authors, whose detailed perspectives I am on occasion found to inhale greedily (usually when there are a few moments of quiet around here. Quiet? What's that?).
Thanks for reviewing!