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|Till my last breath by Ellynn||2 Review(s)|
|Larner||Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/4/2009|
|What an unexpected twist--to see who it is that he dreams of, and why! A superb piece, Ellyn! Excellently written.|
Author Reply: At first, I thought to write about remembering a man whom my character had killed in a battle - that would be a troublesome, grievous memory too, and I'm sure it wouldn't be easy to forget that either. But then this new idea came, and I thought that this would be a better story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, I am glad you like it.
|Raksha The Demon||Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/4/2009|
|Feanor has a lot to answer for, though this poor Elf's battle-savagery was his own damnation, it was the Oath that brought him into the hell of Alqualonde. |
Quite an effective story of the casualties of Feanor's quest, the young girl, and the narrator too, since he will never be the same and cannot forgive himself.
Author Reply: I believe that neither those Noldor who killed an opponent with a sword in their hand can easily forget what they had done; and killing an innocent civilian in much worse. I wouldn't like to be in his shoes.
Thanks for your review!