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Family Matters  by Lindelea 3 Review(s)
DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/28/2010
Oh, this looks like a really interesting follow-up! I'll be looking forward to seeing more of Tolly's recuperation, and the aftermath of his experience!

Author Reply: It's getting interesting. Pippin (and Ferdi) do keep putting themselves in... the story has grown from its humble beginnings to something rather more.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/26/2010
Poor lad--now that he can parse "drink" it IS time to see him on the road toward home again! Heh! Glad all are there to help him! And good to see something new from you, although I still hope to see more of Thorn and Thain soon.

(Hint, hint, nudge, nudge....)

Author Reply: Yes, still working out Thorn and Thain. Got a bit of a thorn in my side there, yes, pun intended. It keeps perking away in the back of my consciousness, and one of these days that little plot point will resolve itself in the back of my head and I'll see it clearly and probably hit myself on the forehead and say, why didn't I see that before? (Come on, Musie-dear, I know you can figure it out...)

It's been happening in a few other stories, lately, stuck places suddenly becoming clearer, so I still am hoping the same will happen with Thain.


LarnerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/26/2010
Having been industriously editing a story that I hope soon to put up for review, I understand about the need to "explain" discrepancies such as this. Am so glad I'm NOT the only one! Heh!

Author Reply: You certainly aren't! LOL!

(I'm glad to know I'm not the only one, too.)

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