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Magical Moment  by Ellynn 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/18/2012
No, I hadn't guessed rightly, but I rejoice to see like father, like son! A perfect moment for Eldarion and his own lady-love! Excellent imagery here.

Author Reply: I did my best to deceive the readers! :)
Thanks for you kind words, dear. :)

eilujReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/17/2012
Nice fic, and a suitable match for Eldarion (of course that's not the primary consideration for the family, but the citizenry will appreciate her birth and beauty).

No, I didn't guess correctly.

Partly because I'm not convinced Arwen fell in love with Aragorn the first time she saw him. (But I have temporarily been persuaded by some good fics, and I liked Arwen and Aragorn's exchange of glances at the end.)

Author Reply: I am not sure that Arwen fell in love at the first sight, either, but then, it's not about her this time, is it? *grins* But I'm sure that she liked him a lot. Perhaps she was also confused when she had realized she was so attracted to him?
Anyway, thanks for the review, I'm glad you like it. :)

FiondilReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/17/2012
I read it at Teitho and it got one of my votes. I loved how to the very end you think it's Arwen and Aragorn and then it turns out to be Eldarion seeing his future bride on 'some enchanted evening, across a crowded room'. That is so cute and I could so see the scene. Good job!

Author Reply: I am glad you like this little detail (across the room) and that you can see the scene. Thank you so much for the review. :)

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