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An Unexpected Adventure  by KathyG 4 Review(s)
atealgirlReviewed Chapter: 31 on 12/25/2020
I liked how Boromir supported Hama. I liked Kevin's reactions to Gandalf driving Sauruman out of Theoden, and that Kevin invoked the name of Jesus. I wonder what adventures the parents and the girls will have on the journey, hopefully nothing too perilous but with Glorfindel you never know. I never noticed the lights in Treebeard's ent-house before, a gift from Yavanna perhaps.
Thanks and Merry Christmas,

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/15/2019
So the McClouds have set out from Imladris - suitably escorted, and with their little girls and Lucy along! I'm glad, though it will be a dangerous venture for them all. I wonder what way they'll be travelling? (I really hope they can make frumenty along the way, or when/if they ever get home. *I'd* like to try it, actually.)

It's good to see Treebeard taking care of Merry, Pippin, Jennifer and Joey as well as he can, too! That was a long journey, all those ent-strides! I wonder what effect the Ent-draught will have on the children? Knowing what it did to Merry and Pippin...if it has the same effect that'd be rather alarming for their parents!

Author Reply: Yes, wouldn't it be, though?! LOL! It would be rather difficult for the children to explain to their teachers and classmates how they grew so suddenly in just one week. [g]

Yep, the rest of the McClouds are on their way now! I'm sure that Steve, at least, would love to get a copy of their frumenty recipe. =)

Author Reply: The journey of the parents and little sisters is going to be one part of the tale that will be completely new to everyone! DF

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/8/2019
At least they are now in a safe place with quite the protector, and their parents are on their way to find and join them.

Author Reply: And thank goodness for that, huh?

I do wish that the SoA server would send me notifications of reviews, so I would know to respond to them as soon as I receive them!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 31 on 2/1/2019
It was a very long story at this point, but Treebeard did not seem to notice.

LOL, of course he didn't. He's an Ent!

I enjoyed the lovely departure from Rivendell.

Author Reply: LOL! Indeed!. =)

I'm glad you enjoyed that. The elder McClouds and their 2 youngest daughters have quite a journey ahead of them, looking for the rest of their children.

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