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An Unexpected Adventure  by KathyG 4 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 84 on 8/28/2021
Oh, my! This chapter was such a mix of emotions. First smiling at Kevin's miscommunication mishap, then feeling sympathy for Jen (I worked past 2 and was up at 8 this morning, so I'm better off than she is, but I've pulled a double shift before and feel her pain), then laughing at the two boys, then shocked and worried... (Oh, but how I love to read about Bergil!)

Boromir is such a wise leader. It's no wonder his men loved him so. There's so much mercy and understanding woven into this chapter. And I'm glad Bergil will be okay.

Best to you and DF.

Author Reply: You know what it's like, don't you? It's all too easy to start making mistakes when you're exhausted, and medical professionals can I'll afford to make those mistakes. Fortunately, Jennifer's error was caught just in time. And yeah, poor Kevin! =)

It is most fortunate that Boromir survived, because so much bad resulted from his death, and as you said, he's a wise leader. K.G.



LarnerReviewed Chapter: 84 on 4/18/2021
Being tired and/or excited can lead to such mistakes. May they all find comfort in the fact they are together and have others to aid and comfort them as they learn more and do their best to make things better.

Author Reply: Definitely! I agree. And Jennifer's near mistake arose from the fact that she was too tired, and from the fact that she can't read Westron very well. K.G.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 84 on 4/16/2021
The children are certainly learning some important and life-changing lessons.

Author Reply: All four of them are, yeah! Most definitely. K.G.

SharonbReviewed Chapter: 84 on 4/16/2021
Oh my, all the bigger kids are having problems in the last two chapters. But they have also been a good help to resolve the problems too.

Author Reply: Yeah, aren't they, though?! Thank goodness they do have help in resolving them. K.G.

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