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Discovery  by Ellynn 8 Review(s)
NowayReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/13/2020
What the hell did I just read? My God! If your trying to make this realistic I lost it the moment he and the bear stared each other down.

Author Reply: Well, all I can say is - if you continue reading, you'll see what happened next and why the bear stared.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/15/2020
This is quite the most dangerous situation any hiker may find himself in. I suspect, however, that this stillness and holding of her gaze may in the end serve him well, better, perhaps, than the pepper spray.

Author Reply: Well, I wouldn't like to be in his place and meet a bear, definitely... *shivers* But the big surprise comes for him!!!
Thanks for the review!

elizaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/3/2020
Happy New Year Ellynn,
I didn't review every chapter because once I started reading I couldn't stop long enough to review, lol.
This was a great story from beginning to end. lol I did have to giggle at your endnote because even while watching the Hobbit, I wondered where Beorn got his clothes from.
Thank you again, this was a well written, very imaginative story and glad to see Beorn getting a little literary love.

Author Reply: Well, concerning clothes, I suppose that Beorn didn't have many problems - I mean, we know that for most of time he was either alone, or surrounded by small number of people, so I guess there weren't many chances for him to be seen without clothes *giggles* But today's modern world, with many people around... well, that's more tricky! :)

I'm glad you like the story, thanks so much for the review! and happy 2020 :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/3/2020
What an imaginative story. Beorn's descendants, how wonderful! I really loved these lines:

In those deep wise eyes, both human and bear's eyes at the same time, lay hidden a whole world the world he would now discover.


all of us will stand together in a final battle against evil. We are stronger than ordinary people and we can give a bigger contribution

So heart warming and inspiring. Thank you for this tale.

Author Reply: And thank you for reading and reviewing, it means so much to me. *hugs*
I'm glad you like it.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/27/2019
Oh my goodness, what's going to happen NOW? I like the descriptions of his new senses... I wonder what it would be like to see/smell/sense the world, for just a few minutes, the way my dog does.

Author Reply: I'm glad you like the detail about his new senses :) And yes, I also often wonder how it would be to feel the world if we had better senses - especially when I'm watching documentary movies.
Thanks for the review! :)

MirkwoodmaidenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/21/2019
I am fascinated to see where this goes!


Author Reply: You'll soon discover! :)
Thanks for the review :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/20/2019
What a magical experience.

Author Reply: Maybe - but it will also be very scary. Just wait and see.

And thanks for the review! :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/13/2019
I'm intrigued! Looking forward to more. :)

Author Reply: Thank you, dear! :)

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