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Reclaiming Khazad-dm  by Ellynn 4 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 31 on 9/3/2021
Alas! To so underestimate the orcs would be such a shock! I so hope Narvi isn't too badly injured! Mahal protect them all!

Author Reply: Even the best leaders make mistakes occasionally.
Thanks for the review!

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/16/2021
Ouch... Not good (for the Dwarves, I mean). :( Overconfidence has its price. The Orcs devised a good plan. Waiting eagerly what happens next!

Author Reply: Well, I had to complicate Dwarves' lives a little bit, didn't I? *grins* And I did it again, and again...
At least Durin learned the lesson!
Thank you for the review, dear!

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/13/2021
Hi here's my review.

Disbelief. Suspense. Waiting for next chapter.


Aran




Author Reply: In a week ;)

Now we are in the part of the story that we can dub "empire strikes back"... I mean, the orcs, the orcs!!! :)))

Thank you!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 31 on 6/13/2021
Such a clever, and devastating, attack. You describe this tragedy beautifully.

Author Reply: Well, the orcs used what they had at hand. I didn't describe it in the story, but I imagine that those rocks (that the orcs used) were there from long time ago - who knows, maybe even back from the age of the dwarves? Maybe the dwarves used/needed them for something, and when they were banished, the rocks remained. And the orcs used them.

We knew it wouldn't be easy for the dwarves.

Thank you, dear. :*

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