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Reclaiming Khazad-dm  by Ellynn 3 Review(s)
AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/27/2021
Suspense is making me ache to know the outcome!

Author Reply: Step by step, week by week...
Thank you so much for the review!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/27/2021
What a horrific, but very logical, trap. I'm so relieved every time we know that Darri is safe!

Author Reply: Don't worry, I will not kill the main characters. That is, POV characters :)
But... be prepared. Darri's father is not the only named character who does not survive the war. I think it's more realistic that way.
Thank you so much. *hugs*

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/27/2021
Great chapter, I like the suspense! Hot grease and water is a vile move. :( These Orcs are quite smart. But they also should be, with all kinds of nasty things, devised to kill and cause pain...

Author Reply: At first, I wrote water and oil - I did it automatically, without thinking. I mean, in our everyday life, we know that hot oid and water are bad combination, and that if the oil catches fire, we must not extinguish it with water. But then a friend warned me that the probability for the orcs having the oil is very small, but that they would probably have grease (from the animals - from the game they catch). That surely made more sense.

Thank you for the review and the compliments! :)

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