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A Perilous Journey to Lorien  by LadyJaina 3 Review(s)
Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/27/2021
I like your story very much:) itís well-written and the plot naturally intertwines with canon! Thank you for sharing!

Author Reply: I'm so glad to hear that like what you are reading! Sometimes I wonder if I'm getting things just right--I'm a bit of a perfectionist! I really appreciate your kind worse!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/17/2021
Nicely done. I love Merry's problem-solving, and that Gimli would know which rocks were true. And here is the "hobbit-skin" I was just wondering about! Ack, poor Sam and poor Frodo and poor Legolas! I hope they can get that arrow out soon, and I hope it's not a poisoned wound.

NurayyReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/27/2021
I like how you are writing every chapter from a different POV. It is interesting to get to see their thoughts.
Poor Legolas! I especially love to see Gimli's thoughts and reactions about Legolas. Touching a soft spot, a care, and a friendship I love so much slowly begin.
You did so well also showing Gimli's grief for his kin, the people he knew and cared for, so much death and destruction.
I also like how you wove in quotations of the book.


Author Reply: Thank you! I couldn't decide on a favorite point of view...so I just had to do them all!

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