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Hunting the Spider  by Ellynn 40 Review(s)
AldwenReviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/4/2021
After the cliffhanger at the end of the previous chapter, I am very glad it resolved like this! :) Thank you so much for a happy ending and for a really nice story!

Author Reply: And thank *you* for the support throughout the whole story. *hugs*

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 16 on 11/3/2021
Three cheers for such a glorious, happy, satisfying ending! Your characters are courageous and noble, the monster is finally slain, the villages are safe, and Faramir finally gets his happily-ever-after. Well done.

Author Reply: Awww, thank you so much for your compliments and support throughout the whole journey. *big hug*

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/29/2021
Wow! That was a good one! First we are moving along purposefully with Haldar and his dark memories. You go from one thread to another, bringing them steadily closer. Then, they all come together! Will she reach one of the boys before the soldiers can reach her? I suspect that after what ever happens here, poor Halder might decide he is ready to retire.

Author Reply: Thank you for the compliments!

As for retirement... we'll discuss that after the last chapter. :)

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 15 on 10/29/2021
You certainly know how to craft a cliffhanger. Arrogance has slowed Shelob's attack, and hopefully EVERYone in the village will be saved. Run, Rangers, run!

Author Reply: Hehe, I did announce that there would be one more suspenseful chapter, didn't I? :D

Don't worry, no more cliffhangers! The next chapter brings resolution.

Thank you! *hugs*

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/27/2021
'Babies don't do anything else except eating and sleeping and they are cute, right?' - yes, keep thinking that, Faramir! Keep thinking that! :-D

On a serious note - the end is frightening. I do hope the rangers get there in time to save those kids!

Author Reply: He will discover that there is so much more about babies, ha? *lol*

It will be even more frightening, I promise... *evil laugh*

Thank you, dear. :*

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/25/2021
Oh no, more suspense! I suspect that everything's coming together for something conclusive to happen.

I really like your Faramir, and his men. They all deserve good food, peaceful rest, and a lifetime of joy with their families.

Author Reply: Hehe, one more chapter of suspense, and then conclusion in the final chapter :)

I am so happy to hear you like them :)))

Thank you! :*

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 13 on 10/21/2021
The image of a furious, vengeance-bound giant spider in dark tunnels, dripping venom and kicking bones... scary! Great description!

Author Reply: Tkanks!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 13 on 10/21/2021
he hoped he would never again have to knock on someone's door and deliver bad news to the family. And now he would have to do it again no less than nine times

What incredibly sad duty for any commander, especially after believing the days of battle were well over.

Author Reply: Indeed :( I guess it's something one can never get used to. :(

Thank you *hugs*

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/17/2021
Very nice battle strategy and excellently described!

Author Reply: Thanks! *hugs*

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/17/2021
I love seeing Faramir written as the skilled warrior and military leader that he is. Just because he doesn't love battle for its own sake doesn't mean he can't win them...

Author Reply: I'm glad to hear you like my Faramir *happy*
Thank you for the review. :)

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