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|The Green Grave by Ellynn||11 Review(s)|
|Adonnen Estenniel||Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/7/2011|
|I loved your collective use of 'we' throughout this piece. It was really charming and gave the narrative a lilting style that was truly wonderful. 'Their' description of Arwen was wonderful; I thought you gave her observed character a wonderful amount of depth and wisdom, as befits her role in the story. |
Also, just out of curiosity, who was the 'we' who narrated this piece? They sounded like Men, which I found to be interesting. I'm not as familiar with Lothlórien as I should be. (Not suggesting you go something wrong, just genuinely interested, hah)
Anyway, fantastic piece!
Author Reply: The narrators are the trees, of course. I mention "our leaves" and "our roots" now and then. ;)
Thank you so much for your kind review. :)