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Reclaiming Khazad-dm  by Ellynn 116 Review(s)
AldwenReviewed Chapter: 36 on 7/11/2021
This was sweet! :) I am glad they had those few moments together!

Author Reply: awww, thanks, i'm glad to hear that! :)))

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 36 on 7/11/2021
It's so good that these young people can comfort one another, and make each other smile and even laugh in such dire times.

Author Reply: Family, friends, partners - the most important in our lives. <3

Thank you. *hugs*

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 35 on 7/9/2021
Poor Halldis, I so sympathize with her! The uncertainty, balancing on the edge of hope and despair, not knowing whether she will find those she loves alive... You depict that really good! And the diary entries are a great way of showing Durin's thought process and personality.

Author Reply: thank you so much, dear. *hugs*

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 35 on 7/7/2021
What a relief for her. :)

I really like Durin's diary entries, they give a glimpse into a leader's heart and mind.

Author Reply: I'm glad to hear that! *happy*

Thank you *hugs*

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 35 on 7/7/2021
I suspect there's gonna be reinforcements soon for the Dwarves. Heheehe

Author Reply: Reinforcements, as in, more dwarves coming? Uhm... no.
Just curious, what gave you that impression? Now I wonder if I've done something wrong... :/
Anyway, thanks so much for the review!

AldwenReviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/4/2021
I am glad Darri is out of danger for the present! I like the healer too. :)

Author Reply: Awww, I'm so glad for that! :)
Thank you, dear. :*

AranadhelReviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/2/2021
I like the healer, Vestri.

Reminds me of my surgeon lol.


Author Reply: It's great to hear that the people like the characters! *happy*

Thank you!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 34 on 7/2/2021
"And besides the burned gear, there is an inscription all over your forehead 'I am in pain

He's a well-trained healer indeed, and Darri is lucky to be helped so skillfully.

Author Reply: "To have an inscription all over one's forehead" is a direct translation of a Croatian phrase *giggles* I thought it would fit here :)))

Thank you, dear *hugs*

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 30 on 6/27/2021
Oh, I know the feeling well. It's why I try to comment on every chapter I read (except those few times I find nothing good or constructive to say). The realities of war are horrid to face, and Halldis is learning this lesson well. I respect her courage.

Author Reply: I appreciate your reviews so much. They mean so very much to me. Thank you. *hugs*

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 29 on 6/27/2021
How well I remember that warning. A terrible dream! Now she will see the costs of war.

I pity even the orcs, I find. At least those who flee will trouble Durin's folk no more--or at least not for a long time.

Author Reply: In one of the writing courses I recently had, I read that the author should achieve that the readers have some feelings even for the antagonist(s). It's good to hear that readers (or at least some of them) sympathize wit the orcs too.
Thank you. :*

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